主管单位:吉林省新闻出版局
主办单位:吉林省舆林报刊发展中心
编辑出版:《警戒线》杂志社
国内刊号:CN 22-1415/D
国际刊号:ISSN 2095-9893
出版地:吉林省长春市
发行范围:国内外公开发行
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